Satisfied?

Goldfinch60



I walk down the street

The darkness surrounds me;

I creep into the shadows

Unseen by all around,

Just hidden,

Awaiting my moment.

I slither across the path

In a sibilant silence,

Back into the shadows.

There before me, I see it,

 I see the way,

The way back.

Through the gate I slide,

Silence is all around.

The cemetery is there,

I see my home,

Hidden from all.

I creep into my coffin

Just as daylight breaks,

I lay there at peace

Awaiting the darkness once more,

Where maybe tonight,

My hunger will be satisfied.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 5th, 2017 02:41
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is one of those poems that came out differently from the way I first though it would be.
  • Category: Gothic
  • Views: 55
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold.

  • Laura🌻

    Enjoyed the video and
    the write. It reminded
    me if Dark Shadows !

  • FredPeyer

    Paints a nice picture of Dracula, like how you wrote this without any blood flowing. Good structure!

    • Goldfinch60

      That is for another night, thank you Fred.

    • Accidental Poet

      That happens sometimes just like that to me as well Goldie. You think you're going in a certain direction, then it suddenly changes course. But still a wonderful piece of writing. Kudos.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you AP, most kind.

      • Louis Gibbs

        Kudos on being able to access the dark side we all have for this fine piece's inspiration. Shows a well balanced soul, Goldie!

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Louis, the dark side only emerges occasionally.

        • orchidee

          ....Who is Kudos?! (Oh do shut up Orchi! lol).

          • Goldfinch60

            He was the God of flying arrows who was around in 1066.

            • orchidee

              Ahh, I couldn't have known him then. I would have learnt about safety with arrows if I had known him.

            • WL Schuett

              A peek into the dark realm , now I wonder where you were heading at the start

            • myself and me

              What is going to satisfy your hunger?

              • Goldfinch60

                Probably a glass of Laphroaig Triple Wood whisky.



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