Ice:
On the ice, she glowed
It glistened beneath nimble feet
She plunged in, cold alone.
Fears:
She was “put to sleep”
I wasn’t there, I’m never
Again another
Closed:
Thrown into the dark
Alone, enclosed, afraid
Do they know I’m gone?
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Author:
M.E.M. (
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Good writes M.
Thank you for taking the time to read them
I like all three, M.E.M. The third one brought to mind Schroedinger's Cat, a paradox, by Austrian physicist Erwin Schrödinger in 1935. An illustration of what he saw as the problem of quantum mechanics applied to everyday objects. Your Haiku perfectly reflects what that cat could have thought!
I love that theory. My Physics teacher Mr. Causey (you can check out his youtube channel and website) brings it up every once and a while. I didn't see that connection till you mentioned it. Interesting thought thank you.
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