Am I Awake?

Naeners

Am I awake

 

I must be asleep

 

Awake is something that I just couldn't be

 

It must be a nightmare

 

Life can't be this bad

 

I hope when I wake up I won't be so sad

 

This all seems like nonsense

 

It isn't for real

 

But that doesn't change how bad it feels

 

I'll wake up at some point

 

Or I may not

 

It seems for now it's here I'm caught

 

  • Author: Naeners (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 12th, 2017 16:07
  • Comment from author about the poem: Please tell me what you think. Constructive criticism is always welcomed.
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Christina8

    I think it's a very good poem! Like Santita, i think it was like i was listening to a conversation you were having with yourself. I've felt like this before! I hope soon you find some relief from the sadness.

  • orchidee

    Well, you 'woke up' to express your thoughts and feelings in a fine poem here.
    Meanwhile, in my daft moments, I night wake people up by yelling a loud 'CCOOOEEEEE!' heehee.



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