Torn from the stars
Made blind to his vision
So not to break his heart,
He wonders and wanders;
This lonely solo survivor
Of two old souls in tandem
Come once again to observe
And share their earth experience.
Yet as madness's encroachment
Confirms his heart's knowing,
It's a journey not intended
To be suffered solitarily.
So far from home ...
So painfully alone.
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Author:
Louis Gibbs (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Be at peace, Jon.
- Category: Friendship
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Comments5
Sensitive write Louis.
Great write Louis
Good write and good choice of words.
A slow and sad feel to this grieving lament Louis - - how powerful those two last lines.
Thank you for your kind and understanding words, Fay. Always appreciated.
Very touching write , peace brother.
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