Louis Gibbs


Torn from the stars

Made blind to his vision

So not to break his heart,

He wonders and wanders;


This lonely solo survivor

Of two old souls in tandem

Come once again to observe

And share their earth experience.


Yet as madness's encroachment

Confirms his heart's knowing,

It's a journey not intended

To be suffered solitarily.


So far from home ...

So painfully alone.


  • orchidee

    Sensitive write Louis.

  • Michael Edwards

    Great write Louis

  • scary-mary

    Good write and good choice of words.

  • Fay Slimm.

    A slow and sad feel to this grieving lament Louis - - how powerful those two last lines.

    • Louis Gibbs

      Thank you for your kind and understanding words, Fay. Always appreciated.

    • WL Schuett

      Very touching write , peace brother.

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