Dear great spirit,
I've come to the point where there is a feeling far in the distance. Like the highest peek from the bottom of a mountain, you know it's there but you won't even get a glimpse of it til half way.
Is this an endless climb? Will there even be a top? Or does it just get easier to never stand and feel the moment of complete freedom, in awe of me passing through the trials and tribulations in my journey.
You've listened to the rhyme in my head,
From the beginning you heard every bit,
You know the place I stand,
A witness to all that I am.
This moment of being what I saw I could be,
Not letting my emotions control my physical energy,
Anger and resentment no longer sit on my plate,
I feel it in my heart that love is the better way.
May this reflect in me and bring light,
On what is at this very moment,
A huge test on my inner wolves.
Humbly
From me
To you
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Poetic Dan (
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A truly heartwarming read Dan and written with a nod to right metre and rhyme this must be one of your most appealing writes - A definite fave. for me.
Thank you, I speak from the only place I know. Really appreciate your support
Good strong write, yes love is the better way.
Thank you my friend, much appreciated.
So beautifully expressed
Poetic Dan...
“Anger and resentment no
longer sit on my plate,
I feel it in my heart that
love is the better way.”
At times it’s difficult, but
that is the better direction!
Thank you, and for inspiring my thoughts to go off on a piece about direction. As right now I'm lost as part gets 😉
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