The Break UP

Birddie Jane

  1. future
  2. remember
  3. hope
  4. careful
  5. scared
  6. memory
  7. lonely
  8. nervous
  9. chance
  10. love

 

The Break Up

I could see it

A future like no other

I remember

That first day I saw you

I had hope

Hope that we would be close

I was careful

Careful not to move too fast, be too honest

I was scared

When you grew distant

Memories of heartbreak playing over and over

I was lonely again before I actually lost you

I was nervous about having to move on

Move on without you in my life

Please

Give us another chance

I thought what we had was good

I thought you knew

I love you

 

  • Author: Birddie (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 14th, 2017 16:14
  • Comment from author about the poem: Don't worry! my bf and i did not break up....this is an old poem I found on my google account and decided to post so that I may have more time to develop the one i am working on now. The method I used in this one is a method i use often. I come up with a topic or a single word and write down as many relate-able things as I can. I then use this list to create the poem. Some are short like this one, others are quite long. I don't like following rules when writing....if you haven't noticed....
  • Category: Love
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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Thanks JESSIE ~ This is a very poignant poem and I love the style. In Modern Poetry there are NO rules ~ it is ANY words in ANY order. All poetry is cathartic ~ it enable you to bring the "good times" and the "bad times" into the OPEN ~ On MPS you can also get feed back ~ HUGS BRIAN

    • Birddie Jane

      ❤

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Thanks JESSIE ~ pleased you loved my comment ~ Seasonal Hugs ~ BRIAN

      • ron parrish aka wordman

        touching write,i guess we all have been there



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