Just writing it out

Poetic Dan

What is wrong? what is right?
Is this nothing but consequences throughout life?
Who are we to trust? we understand what to know
When our own worlds are made up of others Infinite possibility to respond.

This is how it is, all the way along
Actions and reactions equally propelled
From the beginning till the end
Nothing forgotten all seeds are bed

These give us the desire to live them out
No matter what people say we can do
The only one stopping us is me and you

I fully let go of the knowing, now I wait for you
Letting no assumption guide the way I see
Untangling all of my preconceived ideas
Till nothing is left but the moment that is.

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 15th, 2017 06:35
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Laura🌻

    Like your outlook!
    Living in the present
    is the way to go!
    All the best to you,
    Poetic Dan!

    • Poetic Dan

      Two favourites in a row
      I'm honoured to be me
      For your reflection
      On the who I inspire to become

    • Tony36

      Well Written and Expressed

      • Poetic Dan

        Much appreciated sir, thanks for commenting

        • Tony36

          Welcome

        • Fay Slimm.

          To live in the moment brings ultimate clarity as to who we really are Dan - good write.

          • Poetic Dan

            Thank you, that who is always changing too. Thank you so much

          • Goldfinch60

            Good write, the last line is so meaningful. Each moment of our lives is special.

            • Poetic Dan

              Thank you, this one I hope I listen too 😉

            • FredPeyer

              PD, your poem fits right in with a poem I wrote to be published tomorrow (that decision was made before I read yours), called 'Tired'. It is unbelievable how much the two poems have in common in essence. I love your poem!

              • Poetic Dan

                Nice, I look forward to the goosebumps. Glad it resonated with you on all levels



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