What is wrong? what is right?
Is this nothing but consequences throughout life?
Who are we to trust? we understand what to know
When our own worlds are made up of others Infinite possibility to respond.
This is how it is, all the way along
Actions and reactions equally propelled
From the beginning till the end
Nothing forgotten all seeds are bed
These give us the desire to live them out
No matter what people say we can do
The only one stopping us is me and you
I fully let go of the knowing, now I wait for you
Letting no assumption guide the way I see
Untangling all of my preconceived ideas
Till nothing is left but the moment that is.
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Poetic Dan (
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Like your outlook!
Living in the present
is the way to go!
All the best to you,
Poetic Dan!
Two favourites in a row
I'm honoured to be me
For your reflection
On the who I inspire to become
Well Written and Expressed
Much appreciated sir, thanks for commenting
Welcome
To live in the moment brings ultimate clarity as to who we really are Dan - good write.
Thank you, that who is always changing too. Thank you so much
Good write, the last line is so meaningful. Each moment of our lives is special.
Thank you, this one I hope I listen too 😉
PD, your poem fits right in with a poem I wrote to be published tomorrow (that decision was made before I read yours), called 'Tired'. It is unbelievable how much the two poems have in common in essence. I love your poem!
Nice, I look forward to the goosebumps. Glad it resonated with you on all levels
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