Tick Toc goes the clock and I just cant stop
Going to past the peak to reach the top.
I can hear water dripping slowly.
I got more values than those who claim to be holy.
my determination unmatched when i find something i enjoy.
Might start as the underdog but will end up top dog as it ends, look out boy...
But the problem im facing,is the opportunities
that haven't been given or taken.
It makes my heart heavy full of sadness.
Thinking how long will I be stuck, will it even happen?
Like my heart is drowning in its own sorrow.
But I ignore that shit in hope of a better tomorrow.
And so tic toc goes the clock.
As time passes me by,
Dry cheeks all these problems that won't be solved by those who cry.
I just cant stop,Going to speak my words until my heart drops.
Climbing past the peak and
chilling at the top.
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Author:
Dakota (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 15th, 2017 16:15
- Comment from author about the poem: Got to keep going no matter how hard it is getting. tell me what you think I would love to hear it.
- Category: Surrealist
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Comments3
It's a message we all need to hear and feel, I know I do. Very real and to the point, keep sharing can't wait to read the next one.
Thanks man that means a lot to me ✊✊.
Pretty good man I feel ya
Thank bro ✊✊
Good positive write, we all need to climb that hill of life and once the top is reached we can look back at our achievements.
Thank you man. Heck ya man can't wait to look back
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