What is Wrong with Me?
What is wrong with me?
Why do I always
Do something so stupid?
All I want
Is to find that someone special.
And I know I did
When I found you.
But I’m so positive
That I am messing it up.
And I can’t help but cry
And ask myself
What is wrong with me?
You are so kind
And you are so brave.
You know what you want
And aren’t afraid to go after it.
I sit in the background
And let others tell me what to do.
I let them call the shots
And run the show.
What is wrong with me?
I want to fix this
I want us to stay strong.
I know it's still only the beginning.
But I've already started
To make a mess of us
What is wrong with me?
Help me to see
Help me to understand
Show me how to be like you
Show me how to be loved
And how to be strong
So that one day I can say
There is nothing wrong with me.
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Author:
Birddie (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 16th, 2017 19:09
- Category: Love
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Comments4
This is a thought process for a lot of us, well at least me. Very well though out and written, thanks for sharing.
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Thanks JESSIE for sharing you Heart & Mind with us ! Being uncertain about oneself and having negative feelings is all part of growing up. We are all "A work in progress" and we all have uncertainties especially about LOVE & RELATIONSHIPS ~ if you didn't you would not be NORMAL. All our lives consist of UPS & DOWNS ~ We have to enjoy the UPS and benefit and learn from them ~ and also to learn that the DOWNS are all transient and will pass. Thinking of you and I'm here for you ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN !
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That was a beautifully written poem. I enjoy the self-reflection within, shows that you recognize your weaknesses. That’s the first step to become better.
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This poem is no longer relevant to me. I now know that it was not me and rather he who is messed up with a capitol F.
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