Waking up from a dream
Kids in my head
I play for a while
Slipping into awareness
You are still in bed
3am I'm here again
Tear for dream now far away
5am it needs to come out
My eyes swell up again
Many thoughts have gone round
I write and share my demons
To get help purging them from my heart
As right now I'm struggling
Can't even carry this on
I'm blessed with my life
But the war is always at the door.
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Poetic Dan (
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knock knock, I'm at your door, AP, if you need any help, then just open up. I feel for you buddy,
That's for that my friend, I felt better not long after penned. As you knock I feel more at ease, thank you for your words in my time of need.
Good emotive write, that war is at peace with those for whom you care.
Really like your words my friend, I only hope they are at peace when I have no clue.
“I’m blessed with my life
But the war is always at the door.”
In some form or another, a war is always at our door!
SO don’t focus on the war...with conviction, focus on all the blessings in your life and knock on our door. We’re here for you!
Thank you so much for you words x
So well expressed ! I know this sentiment only too well. Into my favourites
Much appreciated sorry to hear you understand this feeling that made me what to write this.
PD, you have this uncanny ability to write from your heart and to pull us in. Wish I could help you with your 'demons' in more than just words.
By being here you do my friend as I was told long ago I should stop writing like this but for the last few years I've been given by many on here and life, that I should be proud of the man I've become.
Thank you being here buddy!
We're all here to talk with Dan, this was a wonderful write and thank you sharing that mind-opening quote!
It is great one I truly try to live by but some days we fail when people try to pull you down. Always appreciate your words and vibes my friend, thank you
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