More I write the more I bleed, words from heart & soul to free my spirit

Poetic Dan

Waking up from a dream
Kids in my head
I play for a while
Slipping into awareness
You are still in bed

3am I'm here again
Tear for dream now far away
5am it needs to come out
My eyes swell up again
Many thoughts have gone round

I write and share my demons 
To get help purging them from my heart
As right now I'm struggling
Can't even carry this on
I'm blessed with my life
But the war is always at the door.

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 18th, 2017 00:21
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments6

  • kevin browne

    knock knock, I'm at your door, AP, if you need any help, then just open up. I feel for you buddy,

    • Poetic Dan

      That's for that my friend, I felt better not long after penned. As you knock I feel more at ease, thank you for your words in my time of need.

    • Goldfinch60

      Good emotive write, that war is at peace with those for whom you care.

      • Poetic Dan

        Really like your words my friend, I only hope they are at peace when I have no clue.

      • Laura🌻

        “I’m blessed with my life
        But the war is always at the door.”

        In some form or another, a war is always at our door!
        SO don’t focus on the war...with conviction, focus on all the blessings in your life and knock on our door. We’re here for you!

        • Poetic Dan

          Thank you so much for you words x

        • dusk arising

          So well expressed ! I know this sentiment only too well. Into my favourites

          • Poetic Dan

            Much appreciated sorry to hear you understand this feeling that made me what to write this.

          • FredPeyer

            PD, you have this uncanny ability to write from your heart and to pull us in. Wish I could help you with your 'demons' in more than just words.

            • Poetic Dan

              By being here you do my friend as I was told long ago I should stop writing like this but for the last few years I've been given by many on here and life, that I should be proud of the man I've become.
              Thank you being here buddy!

            • poetboy123

              We're all here to talk with Dan, this was a wonderful write and thank you sharing that mind-opening quote!

              • Poetic Dan

                It is great one I truly try to live by but some days we fail when people try to pull you down. Always appreciate your words and vibes my friend, thank you



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