Don't give up

Naeners

Your tears are for now

But you will feel better soon

Don't give up, my love

  • Author: Naeners (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 22nd, 2017 02:24
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just a haiku cause I was bored, I think it's kind of cute. Please tell me what you think, constructive criticism is always welcomed.
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 19
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Comments2

  • Goldfinch60

    Good write, with a great deal of meaning within it.
    The only point I would make is that the form is spot on except that in the true sense of the haiku they are about nature or the seasons.
    This is a senryu where the same construction is about emotion. Sorry for being a bit pedantic.
    It is still a very good write though.

  • MeltingSn8wman

    thank you i say that because i needed to read that x it is beautiful



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