Your tears are for now
But you will feel better soon
Don't give up, my love
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Author:
Naeners (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Just a haiku cause I was bored, I think it's kind of cute. Please tell me what you think, constructive criticism is always welcomed.
- Category: Haiku
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Good write, with a great deal of meaning within it.
The only point I would make is that the form is spot on except that in the true sense of the haiku they are about nature or the seasons.
This is a senryu where the same construction is about emotion. Sorry for being a bit pedantic.
It is still a very good write though.
thank you i say that because i needed to read that x it is beautiful
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