I say it with vigour
I say it with everything I've got
I say it in every word I can
I say it with every string I pluck
I say it in every movement of the bow
I say it Vibrating through my body and soul
No being should ever be forced behind a door
A fine line between authoritative and authoritarian actions.
Willingness and cooperation is the way forward.
-
Author:
Poetic Dan (
Offline) - Published: November 24th, 2017 03:30
- Comment from author about the poem: Today is a big day for me, last night I came on here to help my mind and wow! did you people inspire my inner wolf to stand strong. I'm truly honoured to read so many powerful words on here, only wish I had time to read more. Thanks to everyone for being my part of my inner light, to say what I feel even when my voice is shaking.
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 28
Offline)
Comments3
there is not just one way forward, there are thousands to pick from. I will leave the discoveries for you to discover because it's in ones own heart that can truly see the truth. don't ever rely on others ideas, search for yourself, Poetic Dan. from what I can perceive,m your inner heart is your inner piece but like I said, that fits for me, not everyone. you are one of Billions and billions of people on this planet and please allow me to say, you stick out among the most.
You are so perfectly spot on, there are many ways to get to the point where love and compassion keep peace with order.
I'm very pleased to be told I'm my own kind of normal and stand out as life keeps giving me lessons that I wish to share.
Thank you again, good sir!
I believe, Dan, one-day the clouds of confusion will clear for a sunlight of your own perception to reveal a landscape of thought so beautiful you will almost think you are God. the beauty and ugly of life are you and discovering what they are and do are down to how you perceive it. I have gone almost mad thinking about it all. my mind beckons to the beautiful and wonderful but is aware of distraction all in areas of life and wisdom. you, my friend, are in a position to love life and everything in it, but, never forgetting, to love and adore yourself as much as you so deservedly deserve. you're welcome.
Now that made me cry, thank you sincerely again my friend
maybe, then, somewhere it hit you. preferably in your heart. hold everything good in there that is good and I'm sure you will burst into the love or life. like I said, cherish those fruits you find and keep hold of them. then you can tell the world about it so everyone can have a taste. tears are good also, they are filled with your thoughts so let them drip onto the world too because they also, need to burst into life.
You the man, brilliant lines as again! Healing my friend
The open is there for yo PD, all you need to do is take that first step. Good write.
I took that step but sadly today it feels like it was one I've taken so many times already and still in the same spot. Hopefully time could prove me wrong, but I'll always keep taking them till it's the one that finally moves me.
Thank you for as always kind sir
Even in a dark room behind a closed door there is a sliver of light from below that door. Even in the darkest hour there is that sliver of light. Even in the most hopeless situation there is that sliver of hope. These slivers are the ones we have to hold on to, the ones that will guide us to which way we have to go.
And don't forget, PD, life is uncertain, so make sure you eat your dessert first!!!
Fred you helped change my direction I don't think I could see that slither until it was mentioned. I'm truly grateful for the time you give to me and my thoughts, may your days be peacefulness my friend
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.