I almost took down my walls,
I almost showed you my heart,
But then I saw you,
I saw the real you,
He's dark and mischievous,
He plays with my mind,
He hides in the shadows,
He holds me captive,
I tried to run,
But the chains on my heart hold me back,
The lock is to big,
The key is to well hidden,
I yelled your name,
I yelled out,
I've been locked up for to long,
I'm not the same me with you,
My mind has been leeched by you,
Who am I?
Stuck in these chains.
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Author:
Makenna.M (
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- Comment from author about the poem: About toxic relationships and how you can forget the real you and get locked away.
- Category: Love
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Welcome FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first POEM ! You have shared a frightening (TOXIC RELATIONSHIP !) and sound advice ~ AVOID THEM ! It happens to MEN as well as LADIES and it does crush our individuality ! I am in a nice relationship now with my GF Angela (Please read my Poems). The way MPS works is: If you comment on other peoples Poems they will comment on yours and also you can build up a CIRCLE of FRIENDS by invitinem ~ as I am inviting you ! MPS is an empathetic and supportive site I trust you will get some feed back ! But remember you have to comment to get comments (Quid pro Quo !) I enjoyed the STRUCTURE and SUBJECT of your poem ~ It complemented my experience with a TOXIC LADY! More poems please ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
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