BE MINE
As grape is to wine, be mine.
As glaze is to shine, be mine always.
As grape is to wine, be mine.
As cloud is to sky, till I die.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A shortie plus one of my little coastal sculptures
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Comments7
Good write and pic Michael.
Short, sweet and powerful. Superb write.
The coastal sculpture is beautiful.
Many thanks
Keep writing
FineB
"As grape is to wine, be mine."
Marvelous indeed. Without grape, there will be no wine; In wine, no grape could be observed.
Very creative craft.
Your talent for shape and for word are found in the wonderful small coastal sculpture and the short-line romantic write Michael. Super posting.
Good write!
Michael, if you could bottle this poem, I would love to buy one and then drink it slowly and think of you in beautiful Europe!
Interesting poetry
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