When I write what my eyes have seen
The paper trembles
And the pen weeps
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PoeticPsycho (
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I love that your poems all have such a big force to them, and so much meaning for a few lines. Not many can do that. I like the way your write.
i think you should name it "orphic- it means mysterious and entrancing; beyond ordinary and understanding"
Thank you! That means a lot to me. I humbly accept your feedback. I'll be waiting for your next poem (:
A powerful write - love it.
I don't normally go for short poems but I like this - Syd
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