Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87

Confetti

Confetti

 

She watched it fall from the sky,

Her love so powerful it could melt the darkest skies,

The Sun bow to her every word and yields to every motion,

In her world, she is a God,

Sadness does not,

exist in her dimension,

She laid there with a deep breath,

Watching the stars fall from heaven,

Counting each one on her hand,

Waiting for the perfect one to collide in a cylinder of dust,

And when it did, she watched the confetti fall again,

Her eyes widen in bliss and her heart did not feel heavy anymore,

Her body so light and ready to release,

She kissed the stars goodnight and told the moon I adore you,

She waited till the last of the confetti dropped from her beloved sky,

And closed her eyes waiting for the next night to arrive,

For she can again, share with the moon and stars secrets to each other.

Comments5

  • Accidental Poet

    Very beautiful poem Confia. So is this something you wrote, or someone else? I see this as you offering up your secrets to the moon and stars, and the confetti is their replies to you as inspirational ideas for you to write of. Excellent write. Thanks for sharing.

    • Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87

      I wrote this, I refer to the moon and stars as a past time and current, something I still do, Talk to the moon and stars. I feel like it's my escape to say anything I want to say and they will listen to any thought I may have or worry and keep my secrets.

      • Accidental Poet

        That's a very interesting way of thinking of the moon and stars. I like that. It's a beautiful write.

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      • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

        Wow this is so imaginative n brill. Great freeverse muse here. I like to use the word confetti in poems but u used it in a metaphor sort of which is super. Kudos.




        Do pls review my latest poem too., would luv u to add your thoughts on it.

        • Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87

          Thank you, S.Zaynab.Kamoonpuri.
          The encouragement and nice words. I'd love read your work.

        • Alf W

          Hello :) .. I love how you form this poem, having done so since childhood, and create for us those thoughts, feelings and emotions, and in our own imaginations you have planted such a beautiful seed. Love you poem, thank you.

          • Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87

            Thank you, Alf W.
            I really joyed the sweet input you gave me, I also enjoyed reading your work. I'm looking forward to seeing more of it on the Poetry Feed.

          • PoeticPsycho

            Beautifully told. I love the metaphors and way you have the power to create a vivid picture in my head with your words.

            • Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87

              Thank you, PoeticPsycho.

              I'm glad my poems thank imagin what I see, that makes me happy when someone can envision my peoms.

            • Butterfly100

              Started to read your poems, I love all that I read. Thanks for sharing them.



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