Lonely days
Black umbrellas
Cloudy mind
And crying sky's
Dark fears
They consume me
Don't leave me
Don't let it rain
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Author:
Naeners (
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Good emotive write, sometimes though the rain will wash away those 'Dark fears' and lead you towards the light where you may need a parasol to screen you from the sun.
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