Tony36

Wind

As the wind blows through the trees

May my soul flow just as free

Comments4

  • orchidee

    Good write Tony. An alternative version - lol -
    'As the wind blows through the trees,
    It cuts me in half; I seize up; and bits fall off me'.
    We will all swoon if I say which bits!

    • Tony36

      Thank you, nice alternate version

    • Michael Edwards

      Just great - as good as a shortie comes.

      • Tony36

        Thank you

      • FineB

        Awesome and poignant.

        A powerful little poem.

        Keep writing
        FineB

        • Tony36

          Thank you, keep writing as well

        • Fay Slimm.

          Good thought in this write Tony.

          • Tony36

            Thank you



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