Rhythm

Mottakeenur Rehman

Riding ever inside a pencil

Never say -I am too tired to go on.

Just go ahead-

Never cease to thrill your inner ability.

Exalt yourself for one more day;

One never knows when the world might end

Just go ahead-

One lives because one doesnot remain inert!

Even your pain will come in handy someday,

So love your sweet agony

And hold your memories as honey.

And remember -all your life you have been doing so .

 

  • Author: Mottakeenur Rehman (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 3rd, 2017 03:18
  • Comment from author about the poem: Failure is the piller of success.don't for sake hope...Now You are addicted to poetry...you will survive!
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Michael Edwards

    And I'm addicted to this piece - a great write with a strong message.

  • Mottakeenur Rehman

    I am glad to read your comment!

  • ForeverJesus7

    There is a strong message behind your poem. Good work my friend.

  • Caring dove

    i really do like this .. a very good piece of writing , the first line pulled me in ''riding ever inside a pencil '' interesting wording here which i very much like. that line just makes me think of how there is so much energy in words, and a pencil or pen lets us speak those words, writing for me is a way to soothe that pain , to distract from the bad , to let our emotions out and to speak what we want to say



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