Riding ever inside a pencil
Never say -I am too tired to go on.
Just go ahead-
Never cease to thrill your inner ability.
Exalt yourself for one more day;
One never knows when the world might end
Just go ahead-
One lives because one doesnot remain inert!
Even your pain will come in handy someday,
So love your sweet agony
And hold your memories as honey.
And remember -all your life you have been doing so .
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Author:
Mottakeenur Rehman (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Failure is the piller of success.don't for sake hope...Now You are addicted to poetry...you will survive!
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And I'm addicted to this piece - a great write with a strong message.
I am glad to read your comment!
There is a strong message behind your poem. Good work my friend.
Thank you!
i really do like this .. a very good piece of writing , the first line pulled me in ''riding ever inside a pencil '' interesting wording here which i very much like. that line just makes me think of how there is so much energy in words, and a pencil or pen lets us speak those words, writing for me is a way to soothe that pain , to distract from the bad , to let our emotions out and to speak what we want to say
Your comment inspired a lot!
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