Little Jewel

deepthoughts

Tender dreams were tragically crushed

A shoe sole shattered to pieces, the buckle cracked in two

Vicious words were uttered

The leather slowly fading

As it was held together with glue

The glue chipped away and down the hole I went

 

Deep down I traveled where dark was the only light

Depression the only emotion

Depression is the only smell

Rain pours down, soaking you

The wind comes by, chilling you to the bone

Life is a roller coaster that only goes down

Down. Down.

Depression lays down on you like a weight, pushing harder

And harder- until it ruptures.

 

But then you see the light.

 

The roller coaster smoothes out into a level pace

And the weight lifts

And the smell of happiness hits your nose

And the light- so beautiful- is shining

 

Shine bright little light

I’m surprised at what you do

You are vast and yet you are miniscule

Wondrous, hope giving and promising

Like a jewel in the sky

 

 

When life plunges down

If no one is there

Then you shine your light

The whole ride, shine bright little jewel

You stay the whole ride,

Not just for the ups, but for the downs too

 

Thank you for the small spark

You helped me see the path to take

Though miniscule you may be

Small, but bright.

You are a miracle, little jewel

 

Shine bright little light

I’m surprised at what you do

You are vast and yet you are miniscule

Wondrous, hope giving and promising

Like a jewel in the sky

  • Author: deepthoughts (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 8th, 2017 21:15
  • Comment from author about the poem: Please comment what this poem means to you; the metaphorical meaning in your eyes.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 20
  • User favorite of this poem: Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose).
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Comments2

  • deepthoughts

    You can tell that your poems suck when you're the only one who comments on it 🙂

    • deepthoughts

      Yeah, that's true.

      • deepthoughts

        When all the comments on your work is you....

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      • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

        hi deep thoughts im sorry you never recieved a comment on this and no , this does not suck , its completely amazing and i love it ! firstly , when i read the first stanza, i think of a girl who is only held upright by the shoes on her feet, they are what keep her walking a nice path or an ok path , now that the shoes have disintegrated , there is no longer anything to keep you on this stable path and down a lost and confusing hole , you go . ''

        this poem makes me think .. how there is only so far we can go down before we have to travel back up again , kind of like a rollercoaster , sometimes the only way out of the depths is to swim back up again .. and for me , the little jewel is the spark in you which makes you want to reach the top again , just my thoughts . really loved this tho , great poem

        • deepthoughts

          Thank you so much for giving me your poem, interesting! I'm glad you like the poem!



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