ShannonXx

The Way She Looked At Me

Did you see the way she looked at me?

With her strawberry chap stick 

The way her vision roams free

With her on trend boots

And viscous walking beat

Did you see the way she looked at me?

Her risen eyebrow

Her naked perfume that will tease

Playing video games

A out of place tomboy at peace

Did you see the way she looked at me?

Her cursing French words

Her worn armor I could see

Charging her wise price

With a stubborn sleeve

She's a played sweetheart in a meadow

Facing a concrete breeze

But did you see the way she looked at me?

Comments4

  • Accidental Poet

    Shannon, so nice to read you again. That's an interesting question here in your write.

    • ShannonXx

      Thank you!!

    • Edthepoet

      A played sweetheart in a meadow, facing a concrete breeze... what a stunning line! Fantastic write Shannon.

      • ShannonXx

        Thank you so much!

      • Goldfinch60

        Very good write Shannon.

        • ShannonXx

          Thanks!!

        • FredPeyer

          Really like your poem, Shannon! Some great word choices, well penned!

          Let her look all she wants...you have nothing to fear!!! She probably doesn't even know how to write! :-)

          • ShannonXx

            Haha thank you!!



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