I think I have actually lost my mind,
The voices in my head make me blind.
Where did I go wrong?
Is this where I’ll be lifelong?
I wish I could shut them out;
The only therapy is to shout.
But nobody is listening…
Nobody understands…
I’m sorry that I’m a disappointment,
There is no prescribed ointment,
For letting someone down.
Why am I not good enough?
That’s okay because I’ll always be tough,
And put on a fake smile.
Maybe this struggle will be worthwhile.
Right?
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Author:
Aiden C. (
Offline) - Published: December 11th, 2017 21:44
- Category: Reflection
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Comments1
I can feel the pain in this poem and can relate! I think you should get rid of the "Right" at the end. and add a question mark after worthwhile. But overall i love it, it has the emotion bleeding through and through!
Thank you so much!
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