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Frank Prem

my ensemble is
the keys beneath my fingers
the screen backlit
a-glow
bits that tumble wild
like words
across a piece of paper

 

together
we are one

 

together we chase fireflies
and set those sparks alight

 

together we are more
much more
than I am

 

together we are

 

with you

 

we
are

 

~

  • Author: Frank Prem (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 13th, 2017 01:39
  • Category: Reflection
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Comments3

  • Synesthesia

    Enjoyed this Frank!

    The change is just mho, because it’s a great image as it is,

    together we chase fireflies
    to set sparks alight

    I like the extra t sound, and a shorter line, maybe doesn’t work for you

    Also, when do words tumble wildly, on paper?

    Could they be spoken?

    S

    • Frank Prem

      Hi Synesthesia.

      A couple of interesting suggestions - thank you. I'll play around with your ideas a little and see what happens. I rely a lot on the 'sound and feel', so I appreciate your thoughts much.

      Meanwhile, delighted you enjoyed and thanks for commenting.

    • orchidee

      Good write Frank.

      • Frank Prem

        Hi O. Thanks much. Welcome to the anonsom, BTW. CHeers.

        • orchidee

          I\'ve blown a fuse with the title! I dunno what it is. Nor does google! I dunno what I'm being welcomed to. lol.

          • 2 more comments

        • Michael Edwards

          Words for me tumble on paper all the time metaphorically speaking - great write Frank.

          • Frank Prem

            Happens that way for me too Michael. Thank you. Sorry I'm a day late responding.



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