my ensemble is
the keys beneath my fingers
the screen backlit
a-glow
bits that tumble wild
like words
across a piece of paper
together
we are one
together we chase fireflies
and set those sparks alight
together we are more
much more
than I am
together we are
with you
we
are
~
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Author:
Frank Prem (
Offline) - Published: December 13th, 2017 01:39
- Category: Reflection
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Comments3
Enjoyed this Frank!
The change is just mho, because it’s a great image as it is,
together we chase fireflies
to set sparks alight
I like the extra t sound, and a shorter line, maybe doesn’t work for you
Also, when do words tumble wildly, on paper?
Could they be spoken?
S
Hi Synesthesia.
A couple of interesting suggestions - thank you. I'll play around with your ideas a little and see what happens. I rely a lot on the 'sound and feel', so I appreciate your thoughts much.
Meanwhile, delighted you enjoyed and thanks for commenting.
Good write Frank.
Hi O. Thanks much. Welcome to the anonsom, BTW. CHeers.
I\'ve blown a fuse with the title! I dunno what it is. Nor does google! I dunno what I'm being welcomed to. lol.
Oh dear, O. I made it up. An ensemble of all the things that result in what I do. Includes your good self.
Sorry it's so obscure. Think I was being a bit too clever.
Ahh an ensemble! I see now.
Words for me tumble on paper all the time metaphorically speaking - great write Frank.
Happens that way for me too Michael. Thank you. Sorry I'm a day late responding.
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