Don't waste your hate

Poetic Dan

My emotions of hate no longer control my wave
There was once a time I'd feed the rhyme
Having no faith in any others time
This was a dark place in my mind
Seeing as I saw selfishness rules

It is no lie that it still flickers by
But thanks to others I soon see the light
As quickly as I can close my fist
My heart races then I open it

I write out my thoughts and emotions
Line them up for all to see
As I opened the window of my mind
To let the breeze run free in me

Hate was a very old friend
Gone but I never forget
Thinking it made me strong
To find loneliness was its song

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 16th, 2017 11:29
  • Comment from author about the poem: This was inspired by being asked to do a fusion write on hate. I really do love this place!
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 50
  • Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻
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  • Laura🌻

    Hi Dan,
    I saw your poem on the Fusioned page! I’m glad you posted it here! It’s a great poem! The first line sucked me right into the poem! I’m happy for you that you’re not letting those emotions of hate control “your wave”! Awesome!

    • Poetic Dan

      Such kind words, your a beautiful soul thank you for helping me want to play it.

    • Goldfinch60

      That hate is always there but as each moment passes it is further away as love will always beat it.

      • Poetic Dan

        Very well said my friend



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