My emotions of hate no longer control my wave
There was once a time I'd feed the rhyme
Having no faith in any others time
This was a dark place in my mind
Seeing as I saw selfishness rules
It is no lie that it still flickers by
But thanks to others I soon see the light
As quickly as I can close my fist
My heart races then I open it
I write out my thoughts and emotions
Line them up for all to see
As I opened the window of my mind
To let the breeze run free in me
Hate was a very old friend
Gone but I never forget
Thinking it made me strong
To find loneliness was its song
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This was inspired by being asked to do a fusion write on hate. I really do love this place!
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Hi Dan,
I saw your poem on the Fusioned page! I’m glad you posted it here! It’s a great poem! The first line sucked me right into the poem! I’m happy for you that you’re not letting those emotions of hate control “your wave”! Awesome!
Such kind words, your a beautiful soul thank you for helping me want to play it.
That hate is always there but as each moment passes it is further away as love will always beat it.
Very well said my friend
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