Tyler14

How the World Began

If God created the world,

Created the land and the sea,

Then why can’t we all live together,

Live in peace and harmony.

 

I don’t believe in God,

I believe in the big bang,

Those are my ideas,

On how the world began.

 

You may not think I’m right,

You may disagree,

But we are entitled to our opinions,

Because we are all free.

 

Comments3

  • Tyler14

    Thank you Outback, very constructive :)

  • Tyler14

    Thanks Ephraim Crud! Like your your poem. I might just change the line.

  • Michael Edwards

    A great write - I agree with Ephraims suggestion by the way but that's not a criticism.



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