So Little

thatfaegirl

So little ups, so many downs

So little smiles, so many frowns

So little happiness, so much sadness

So little pleasure, so much madness

So little good times, so many bad

So little risks, so many to have had

So little love, for those that I should

So little hate, for those that I could

So little emotions, for things that are right

So little I feel, alone with my thoughts tonight

 

  • Author: Nikholizon Nerrezo (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 24th, 2017 04:11
  • Comment from author about the poem: Thought/wrote it at 3am December 24 after watching my sister's live Facebook video... Need help, need support, need some effing love :/
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 12
  • User favorite of this poem: an.g.v.
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Comments2

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME FRIEND ~ Love your Photo ~ so wistful ! Thanks for your first poem ~ Well written but a sad negative imbalance ! Ups & Downs ~ Smiles & Frowns ............... Love & Hate ~ These are all part of life's emotions but they must at least be in balance for you to be happy ~ Why so many NEGATIVES ? It is CHRISTMAS EVE and we all need some help & some love ! MPS is a supportive & empathetic site ~ Thinking of You ~ Love @ CHRISTMAS ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.

  • an.g.v

    Is this your first poem ever written? This reminds me of my first poem ever and it was nice reminiscing on it. This is a rhyme poem, basic but very flowing and that's good.I think you did good if this is your first time.



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