Dangling in the
Abyss of a memory
Vulnerable to linger...that
Indissoluble pain
Deep into my lanced heart it will thrive
Today, tomorrow, and forever!
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Author:
Lauraš» (
Offline) - Published: January 4th, 2018 04:39
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hurting lingers in love forever for sure. a great expression, Laura. keep your chin up and your pen flowing.
Kevin...
Your read and your comments are very much appreciated! Thank you for your support!
~Laura~
Well written and expressed
Thank you for your read and comment! Very much appreciated, Tony!
Welcome
GRAZIE LAURA ~ MIA AMIICA BELLA ! Mi piacerie I ACROSTICI ! This poem is so sad & so poignant ~ I can feel the pain of LOVE ! I'm a bit older than you SWEETHEART and I can assure you that such DOLOR D'AMORE ~ never lasts eternalemente ! BRIAN CON Amore ~ Abbraci e Bacci XOXOX
Mio Caro Amico BRIAN...
Grazie! I hope this sadness
and depression will leave
me...soon! I do appreciate
your comforting words!
Un forte abbraccio e Baci...
~Laura~
This is what poetry is all about. To even express pain with beauty and artistry!
Thank you Fred!
Iām very appreciative and touched by your comments!
So generous and kind of
you!
~Laura~
The more you let in to that heart the more it will grow. Beautiful words my friend
Thank you my friend! Iāll do my best!
Thank you Laura.
What a beautiful poem.
Vivid.
Keep writing
FineB
Thank you for the visit,
FineB!
I appreciate your comment!
Eventually Iāll resume my
writing! The loss of this friend sucked up all my creative
juices!
~Laura~
Love these lines....
"Dangling in the
Abyss of a memory"
Thank you, Kurt!
memories last forever,we hope they are kind
ouch... you have such a way with words Laura, these made me wince for real.... Neville
Neville,
Those words I did not have to think about. They effortlessly spilled onto the paper! It was one of those encounters that will always be remembered no matter how hard one tries to forget!
Thank you for the read and your comments! Always appreciated!
~Laura~
my pleasure my friend... lucky David T... that's what I say.. very lucky... N
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