Dangling in the 

Abyss of a memory

Vulnerable to linger...that

Indissoluble pain

Deep into my lanced heart it will thrive 

Today, tomorrow, and forever!

  • Author: LaurašŸŒ» (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 4th, 2018 04:39
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 73


  • kevin browne

    hurting lingers in love forever for sure. a great expression, Laura. keep your chin up and your pen flowing.

    • LaurašŸŒ»

      Your read and your comments are very much appreciated! Thank you for your support!


    • Tony36

      Well written and expressed

      • LaurašŸŒ»

        Thank you for your read and comment! Very much appreciated, Tony!

        • Tony36


        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          GRAZIE LAURA ~ MIA AMIICA BELLA ! Mi piacerie I ACROSTICI ! This poem is so sad & so poignant ~ I can feel the pain of LOVE ! I'm a bit older than you SWEETHEART and I can assure you that such DOLOR D'AMORE ~ never lasts eternalemente ! BRIAN CON Amore ~ Abbraci e Bacci XOXOX

          • LaurašŸŒ»

            Mio Caro Amico BRIAN...
            Grazie! I hope this sadness
            and depression will leave
            me...soon! I do appreciate
            your comforting words!
            Un forte abbraccio e Baci...

          • FredPeyer

            This is what poetry is all about. To even express pain with beauty and artistry!

            • LaurašŸŒ»

              Thank you Fred!
              Iā€™m very appreciative and touched by your comments!
              So generous and kind of


            • Poetic Dan

              The more you let in to that heart the more it will grow. Beautiful words my friend

              • LaurašŸŒ»

                Thank you my friend! Iā€™ll do my best!

              • FineB

                Thank you Laura.

                What a beautiful poem.


                Keep writing

                • LaurašŸŒ»

                  Thank you for the visit,
                  I appreciate your comment!
                  Eventually Iā€™ll resume my
                  writing! The loss of this friend sucked up all my creative


                • Kurt Philip Behm

                  Love these lines....

                  "Dangling in the

                  Abyss of a memory"

                • ron parrish aka wordman

                  memories last forever,we hope they are kind

                • Neville

                  ouch... you have such a way with words Laura, these made me wince for real.... Neville

                  • LaurašŸŒ»


                    Those words I did not have to think about. They effortlessly spilled onto the paper! It was one of those encounters that will always be remembered no matter how hard one tries to forget!
                    Thank you for the read and your comments! Always appreciated!


                    • Neville

                      my pleasure my friend... lucky David T... that's what I say.. very lucky... N

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