Worst enemy


Worst enemy

The greatest conflict I've had,
Is deep inside of me.
I am my own worst enemy.

And today, another piece of myself I tore.
This constant battle, this endless war.

  • Author: Renzi Mars (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 8th, 2018 12:03
  • Category: Short story
  • Views: 42
  • User favorite of this poem: dusk arising.
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  • FredPeyer

    Ahw, Renzi, we finally hear from you again and you break our hearts!
    Love your enemies, so love yourself!
    My heart, and I am sure many hearts from others here on MPS are going out to you, hoping to make a difference, hoping to be able to help you.

  • Louis Gibbs

    Just a thought, Renzi ... have you tried past-life hypnotherapy to see why you came into this life with your eating disorder affliction? Could help, and can't hurt. My heart goes out to you, sweet one!

  • dusk arising

    Hello Renz old pal. Sad to read your hurt here. Being moved to write for MPS and your own safety valve is a positive thing.
    I'm quiescent at the moment, happy but devoid of the spirit to inspire any output.
    You though,always inspired with your bright, light words revealing your colourful personalty which all who read you came to love.
    Though, on this occasion, pain has brought you here, please share with us more of your words. You have the wonderful gift of leading readers to reflect upon their own plight and look to you with a hope to possess your determination and of course your wonderful communication.

  • Christina8

    We miss you and we are here for you Renzi!

  • Goldfinch60

    Such a powerful write Renzi. Please remember that we are all here for you.
    I do hope that your war comes to a peaceful end and your life continues in love and harmony.

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