He feels ok with his chaotic mess
But when he sees my mess it gets him furious.
So i removed my messed objects from the piano top wooden cover,
And left his.
It seems like he is content now.
Nothing bothers him any longer...
So interesting what we see.
So interesting what we don't see.
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Author:
AVIGAIL (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 11th, 2018 12:00
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Well written and expressed
hey Tony nice to see you here 🙂
OMG AVI ~ This rings a bell when I have shared a ROOM or a HOUSE with other GUYS ! Both Angela and I are very ordered so if & when we do tie the knot it should be OK ! Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN XOX Please check my FUSION on FOOTWEAR ~ Thanks B.
Avigail, I do like this poem. The first six lines setting the stage, leading up to the last two most important lines, the ones carrying the message. And that message is quite universal and I think does go straight to our inner values. It made me think.
My wife has a tendency to drop the car keys and her phone just anywhere when she comes home. Then she cannot find them. I have a place for the keys, always know where my phone is. But then I am messy in other ways, with my tools for example. I use them, after that cannot find them. We see what is important to us, the rest, well....
yes by the end of the day... we have differ by content and background but very similar in behavior - products of humanity's factory ...
you know we see from a different perspective i guess, i guess he just needed to claim a small space
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