beachbabe

Hear Her

Do you hear her

whisper?

Softly like the wind.

Do you hear her 

scream?

Like the thunder 

rolling in.

Listen as she speaks.

Close your eyes,

take it deep.

She’s a whisper.

She’s a scream.

And Everything,

in between.

Comments4

  • FredPeyer

    Welcome to MPS, beachbabe! I have no idea about what you intended with this poem, but to me it is a wave. That one perfect wave on the north shore of Oahu, the one I have been waiting for! Very well penned!!!

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME BEACHBABE ~ Thanks for your first poem which leaves much to the imagination ~ as a good poem should ! To me it invokes a Mermaid ~ very ephemeral ! I have heard them but never actually seen one ! I have met the WIKI WAKI Mermaids in Florida and in the water they took my breath away ~ BUT ~ When we got to talk ~ they were just Ladies with plastic tails ! Maybe one day I will get to meet a real one ! "Thanks for sharing" Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B.

  • Aislinn Wilson

    This is fantastic, I'm in love with your poem

  • beachbabe

    Guys, y’all are so awesome! Thank you so much! This is the first time I’ve wrote in years and it feels so good to do it!



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