day's genesis peels skin
thieving obscurity
seeps rays across windows
too drawn for dreams
- Author: Heather T ( Offline)
- Published: January 20th, 2018 11:03
- Category: Unclassified
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day's genesis peels skin
thieving obscurity
seeps rays across windows
too drawn for dreams
Comments3
Nice to see the great Heather made me think poems again! You haven't lost your touch!
Great shmate, silly goose. I'm honored to have someone pay attention enough to read. Thank you, dear Fred.
So good to see your work here again Heather - your ink flows with rare metaphoric word-pearls. Loved the pathos in this one.
Good to see you, poetess! Thank you for your kind review. I hope you've been well!
Miss your postings Heather - this is a gem.
I appreciate your assessment, friend. It's so good to run into you!
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