Delicious, the first movements of the train
Through the secret back passages
Of the small town
Men drinking coffee behind buildings
Watch us go by
Before they return to the jail of their day
Oh to be with us and away!
- Author: Lorna ( Offline)
- Published: January 23rd, 2018 04:51
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 42
Comments3
Your pen evokes freedom with excellent imagery here - - much food for thought in this read.
Thank you Fay - your comments are appreciated!
Good write and imagery sr.
Love your short train related poem. Recently took the train from San Diego to LA. Beautiful ride along the ocean. And one does see things usually not seen when traveling!
Very much enjoyed your poem!
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