Endings

Lorna

"I did that," I cried, as the horses thundered

And the riders intense with effort and wind-blown

Like mad Valkyrie, galloped by

"I did that," I cried to no one in particular

No one was there to listen, no one to care

But wistfully I repeated to the air "I did that"

  • Author: Lorna (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 25th, 2018 04:33
  • Comment from author about the poem: I did that
  • Category: Reflection
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  • Tony36

    Great write

    • Lorna

      Morning Tony - thanks.............

      • Tony36

        Welcome

      • FineB

        Hi SR.

        Powerful, poignant and vivid.

        Lovely poem.

        Keep writing
        FineB

      • Goldfinch60

        Good write.

      • FredPeyer

        I don't know if it is the writing, or the subject, but after reading your wheelchair philosopher, this one too seems to draw me in, stopped me in my thoughts and made me think.
        'Good writing does that...' I said quietly to myself!

        • Lorna

          What a nice comment - sounds like a poem!



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