Had a commitment of giving
The meters of life to the burnt psyche
The pair of lovers were supposed to be blinded
On a lonely noon of tranquility.
But,
As of today, the scent of
Night-blooming jasmine is out of reach
From the coverage of snout's glee
Time has totally changed...
The weather is so dry
The similar gemstones of the beautiful dew particles;
Drying out themselves, where did they fly off?
Now only remains the gum of eyes.
Alas! How tragic is this!
How the crocodile tears evaporate
In the battle of life.
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Author:
Mottakeenur Rehman (
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Comments4
Thank you Mottakeenur.
Life is full of tearful moments.
A beautiful poem.
I like the description of tears as 'beautious dew particles.'
Keep writing
FineB
Thanks a lot !
A grand work M
Thanks!
Well written, M, with some beautiful word choices!
Thanks!
interesting i like this ! i love how you have expressed yourself throughout
Thanks!
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