Look at the Stars.

Goldfinch60

 

In life we all start the same,

Where we will go is unknown,

But some of us will rise,

Rise into a world of love.

 

Although we know not

Where we will be going,

That way will always be upwards,

If you look at the stars

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 27th, 2018 02:21
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just look up.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 35
  • User favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet.
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Comments6

  • orchidee

    Good write Gold. Do you know the one? (I forgot some of it):
    "Two men in a dungeon - with a window in it!
    One looked down, one looked up
    One saw mud, the other saw stars"

    • Goldfinch60

      Thanks Orchi, yes I had heard that expression.

    • orchidee

      And yes, as one Vicar said in a farewell sermon: Look up! He was rather military. Bit difficult for females to relate to him.

    • Accidental Poet

      Magnificent Andy! I love this. Great write.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you AP, most kind.

      • dusk arising

        Great sentiment. Uplifting.

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you da, much appreciated.

        • Fay Slimm.

          Beautiful thoughts and comforting words.

        • FredPeyer

          Really like this poem, Goldie! We do need to 'look at the stars', or see only the good!

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Fred. So very true, there is good in all we do but some can only see the bad.



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