It’s in her eyes.
Sprinkle fireflies in the night sky,
To illuminate the secret path into my lover’s heart.
She could become mine if the stars were to align
And lead her towards me,
For at this moment she is still afar.
Still, I hope one day she will fall for my charms.
After a blind leap of faith, I will catch her in my arms
And I shall be rewarded with the one that I have always wanted
And no day will ever come to pass where we must be separated.
If she is for me as I would be for her,
This love will conquer all.
A blessing is yet to be heard.
Love will set you free if you just hear its call.
All I need is to see her reaction, when she is talking about me.
Some feelings you cannot hide.
So take this box of rose scented chocolates,
My heart and all of my empathy!
For far too long now, this love has been hidden.
For far too long, I have been holding it inside.
(C)2018 Aa Harvey. All Rights Reserved.
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Aa Harvey (
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Comments1
Very beautifully written Aa.
Thank you.
There are improvements that could be made to the poem and in the future I may change a line or two, but I only wrote it Friday night I think it was, so I am glad it is ok. I liked the poem as I was writing it and I still do, it's just that someone once said
"Art is never finished, only abandoned..."
I personally think that this poem is an example of this...
Ofcourse there is room for additions to be made as your quote suggests, but sometimes I also believe in the saying, "less is more". In effect, leaving just a little to the reader's imagination. I do like your poem as it is.
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