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edwinknox

Body like summer

Eyes that shine like autumn leaves

All just out of reach

 

  • Author: E. Knox (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 10th, 2018 00:43
  • Comment from author about the poem: Hello! Usually I write longer poems, but this time I attempted a shorter one. This is my first time writing a haiku, let me know what you think!
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 36
  • Users favorite of this poem: ImpGratAdapt
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  • Michael Edwards

    Works well - a great first.

    • edwinknox

      Thank you!

    • Lorna

      A lot of longing in a little poem!

      • edwinknox

        So glad you enjoyed!

      • Tony36

        Well written and expressed

        • edwinknox

          Thanks so much!

          • Tony36

            Welcome

          • Sierra

            Short and sweet.. got your point across with just a few words. Try your hand with more short ones!

            • edwinknox

              I plan on it! Thank you!

            • MP Martinez

              Wonderful! Filled with emotions.

              • edwinknox

                Thanks so much for reading!



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