Our world spins, revolves and rotates around the sun
Our lives are well-spent, involved and rotate around the Son
Gravity keeps the earth close to the sun
The Lord’s Spirit helps man stay close to the Son
Gravity is a case of never-ending attraction
The Spirit keeps track of our every action
If the world breaks loose, the Sun pulls it back
When a man breaks loose the Son pulls him back
The first law is Newton’s...universal gravitation
The second law is the Lord’s...universal salvation
The first law is unconditional...it never will fail
The second conditional... lest man’s weakness prevail
The earth’s final status is unending duration
Man hopes to leave life with the Son’s approbation
--c aaron
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Author:
pldabbs (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 10th, 2018 14:44
- Comment from author about the poem: Comparing our Solar System's Sun and the Son of God, each one's importance within the realm of his 'kingdom'. And how much they are alike in their purpose.
- Category: Reflection
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Clever thinking and write.
Thanks for reading!
Good write C.
I wondered why it says ' The SUN of righteousness will arise, with healing in HIS wings...? Though some Scriptures do personalise things, as HE.
Also, I feel the first and second law lines should be reversed. I feel that man who says its the FIRST universal law (gravity).
Thanks for your read and comments. Yes, your 'SUN' could have been replaced with the other, I think. The order of the 'law lines' worked out better for me the way it is, plus the way it interacts with the next two lines.
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