Mottakeenur Rehman

DAFFODIL

Being lonely I am feeling so good !

I am feeling so right!

Affixing myself to the picturesque of that height

Sometimes like a velvety piece of cloud

I fly away very fast high over the hills

Crossing the heart of the valley,

Standing aside the crest of a low hill

Suddenly I have noticed the stretching way of blooming flowers

And the yellow petals,

As if the gold pearl of daffodils;

 

Dancing and sweating in the lap of dew,

On the bank of rivers,

Underneath the stem of greenery world

And at last with the mindblowing rhythm of breeze....

 

 

Gazing and lingering like the glittering stars

Reaching up to the path of milky way

They flickering themselves solemnly.

In a never ending dumb vision,

They hanging on to the peculiar rows,

As if they are played absorbly in association with the red-brown horses;

More than ten million 

I have counted that within a short time

After my eyes capturing the snapshots.

They flutter their heads

As if they are being danced by the rhythm of hip-hop dancing!

The waves have also played with them

Yet, these enormous-freed-notorious waves are wilted with their cheer of pleasantry.

May it probably such in a moment,

None of the poets can capture the charmingness of that scene

Only he can catch if he wish to exhilarate his own entity ;

And if he gets such type of company of comic frhends,

To whom I was most indebted

And now for which I look again again with a gaze of surroundings.

What sort of care they bring to me

Whenever I confine to bed 

Either in the empty or soggy mind of mine,

They scatter the bright of yellowness!

With the fine-grained heavenly pleasure,

Fulfilling the heart of my fickleness

On the petals of daffodil 

And with the rhythm of flawless can-can dancing;

They even conquer the loneliness of my solitary life!!

 

 

 

 

Comments4

  • yellowrose

    stunningly beautiful :-) :-) i loved every line , i found it so nice , how you mentioned the flowers dancing like a hip hop dance, can can dancing and the red horses. you have given those flowers a voice, a movement ... a feeling . really enjoyed reading this , such a lovely piece!

    • Mottakeenur Rehman

      I pleased that you marked this in your favour!!

    • Michael Edwards

      Your wonderful writings never fail.

      • Mottakeenur Rehman

        Thanks a lot!....Me think I am still writing only because of your inspiration!

        • Michael Edwards

          Oh no - you have a great style of your own - please keep writing M

        • 3 more comments

        • Yahchanan AbiyaH

          Now that poetry is natural for you, any thoughts on a play or novella? You truly have a gift, I wonder how deep the pen will write! Until then long live the poetic voice.

          • Mottakeenur Rehman

            Your comment gives me the immense power!

            • Mottakeenur Rehman

              Currently I haven't any thoughts on novella or play.....but I will publish a physical Poetry book as soon as possible.. entitled with ''The Landscape of Poenciana''...after publication at first I will send a copy to you.......due to financial crisis it make take several times. ...

            • FineB

              Hello Mottakeenur,

              What a stunningly beautiful poem full of incredible imagery.

              An amazing write!

              Keep writing
              FineB



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