I've made it here
for a minute I'm happy
but why does it feel like something is at me
something is wrong, something's not right
mom told me ignorance is bliss, i know that it is
cause when he's gone it doesn't feel the same
the thoughts and images reappear in my brain
i cant stop dreaming, i cant stop thinking
of those nights i spent in my room shaking
and tearing out my hair
and remembering the feeling of not wanting to live
thats the worst thing someone can do to your head
Offline)
Comments1
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thank for you first poem ~ It ripples with Rhythm and has enough Rhyme to make it easy to recite ! Well done ! The SUBJECT is one we can all empathise with ~ The major effect ONE PERSON can have on our life ! It is an apt subject for Valentines Day ~ Best wishes for the future ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.