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Blending and reflecting the colors of eyes
Onto the opposite pair;
When two souls meet at the point of harmony,
It's known as the love of true identity!
If one never strays from the other,
And commits to the resolution of faith,
A river of sacred affinity will surely flow
From their eyes, filled with gentle emotions!
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But,
If the spring season of life
Paints colors into human eyes,
How can we blindly rely on the beauty of the mind?
Without understanding the language of love,
Can the union of two lovers
Attain the ultimate dedication of true love?
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Without receiving the response of one's beloved,
Can mere affection satisfy
Heavenly pleasure?
Why does the Taj Mahal of dreamy lands
Shatter into scattered pieces of dreams?
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Author:
Mottakeenur Rehman (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Valentine Day special....simply ~simplified
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- Views: 32
- User favorite of this poem: Lorna.
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Comments4
Another magical write M
🙏👍👍
Very beautiful lines: Why does the Tajmahal of dreamy land
break into the pieces of scattered dream!!
Thanks a lot for your praiseworthy words!
Must agree with Lorna on the stand out lines and image that it solicits. In fact the last lines also sound like an intro to another poem!
Thanks!!🙏
Well written, MR! And yes, love can be simple, or very complicated!
Thanks!
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