Just one look
You’re a luminescent light in a dark grey world.
No bling necessary; it pales into insignificance next to your beauty.
Metal on hand, that piece does not suit you.
A classic band of gold I think you would suit. You suit me.
There is no need to advertise your full time commitment.
It is clear from your beauty, you are already meant,
For another to love, but all sane men would look in the hope,
That there had never been a tan line on your ring-finger…but no.
These eyes do not lie or deceive.
True feelings left to their dreaming,
Of what might have been,
If only there could have been a way,
And one day I will forget you…but not today.
No other has come along who could ever replace,
Or compare to thee. They are less than could be.
I know you will never be mine,
But all wandering minds are fixed on thou
And all of thine divine beauty.
In a far off land lives a travelling man.
He once saw you as you passed by his window.
Since that day he has scaled mountain tops and mined his way,
Through all the gold, always asking, do you know? Do you know,
Who she was?
Once seen, never gone.
Unfortunately you will always remain,
Lost.
(C)2018 Aa Harvey. All Rights Reserved.
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Author:
Aa Harvey (
Offline) - Published: February 16th, 2018 09:21
- Category: Love
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Comments4
Love it x
This is epic, my mind begins to write a screenplay because you've given me such mental pictures. Really admire you for this piece because i wish i could do that. It's going into my fav's.
Thank you.
I am not one to ignore a coincidence when one passes by my soul and as I was playing a song in the background on YouTube that I had just found, I checked my e-mails. I had a new comment, so I came to check it out and maybe find an answer worthy of reply. Unfortunately the song I have chosen for you has no lyrics, but it has now become the song that will forever be linked with this poem, so if you would like to hear it, just look at the video attached to this poem. Thanx for the right words at the right time.
Peace, love and empathy.
Epic Battle Music - One Man Army
I really liked this! Great job!
Well written Aa! Sounds nearly like a fata morgana.
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