Before this storm erupted
this beast was just a boy
son to a dark prince who
thrust himself on a pure
virgin on the unholy alter
of the damned
This gleaming ivory tower
was under a curse occupied
by the dark lords of evil form
hell his birth cries took the life
of a bleeding corpse from whence
he was taken born of a spell
From that moment the sky did dim
darkened day and night were one
and so began the tale of how hell
on earth beneath began
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Zigs & Cat...
Thank you!! Thank you!!
Iām so glad I asked for part 3! An awesome write...better than anticipated! So now I know the tale! So vivid! The ending is brilliant!
I read all three parts!
A superb trilogy!
It should definitely be a t.v. production! I wish I were a producer. I would buy the rights and you would write the script! Your collaboration has worked well!
~Laura~
hi there yes we did all of this cos you asked and we thank you for that I never even thought of doing a part 2 never mind part 3 so thank you for the ask, glad someone read all parts that is nice to know now its done complete In its story regards ,,,zigs
I greatly appreciate it!
Regards,
~Laura~
Good write but the light will never die it will lighten the dark and heaven on Earth will return.
hi many thanks its just a theme ,,,,cheers zigs
True Gold...āthe light will never dieā...
and...
āThe best canāt find you until you put the worst behind you.ā(Madeleine LāEngle)
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