Beneath a co-write with CandleWitch final part 3 )

ZIGGY

Before this storm erupted 

this beast was just a boy 

son to a dark prince who 

thrust himself on a pure 

virgin on the unholy alter 

of the damned

 

This gleaming ivory tower

was under a curse occupied

by the dark lords of evil form

hell his birth cries took the life

of a bleeding corpse from whence

he was taken born of a spell

 

From that moment the sky did dim

darkened day and night were one

and so began the tale of how hell

on earth beneath began    

  • Author: ZIGGY (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 16th, 2018 13:14
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  • LaurašŸŒ»

    Zigs & Cat...

    Thank you!! Thank you!!
    Iā€™m so glad I asked for part 3! An awesome write...better than anticipated! So now I know the tale! So vivid! The ending is brilliant!

    I read all three parts!
    A superb trilogy!

    It should definitely be a t.v. production! I wish I were a producer. I would buy the rights and you would write the script! Your collaboration has worked well!

    ~Laura~

    • ZIGGY

      hi there yes we did all of this cos you asked and we thank you for that I never even thought of doing a part 2 never mind part 3 so thank you for the ask, glad someone read all parts that is nice to know now its done complete In its story regards ,,,zigs

      • LaurašŸŒ»

        I greatly appreciate it!

        Regards,
        ~Laura~

      • Goldfinch60

        Good write but the light will never die it will lighten the dark and heaven on Earth will return.

        • ZIGGY

          hi many thanks its just a theme ,,,,cheers zigs

          • LaurašŸŒ»

            True Gold...ā€™the light will never dieā€™...

            and...

            ā€œThe best canā€™t find you until you put the worst behind you.ā€(Madeleine Lā€™Engle)

            • ZIGGY

              good comment
              I write in themes many thanks ,,,zigs

              • LaurašŸŒ»

                ...and I like to read all genres! One of my most favorite literary work that Iā€™ve read many times is Danteā€™s Divine Comedy...in English and Italian!

                ~Laura~

                • ZIGGY

                  cool,,, I don't read much to be honest wish I did, my next post will be a much different theme just to change the mood ,,,,,read your work soon ,,,zigs

                  • LaurašŸŒ»

                    Will be looking forward to it!
                    ~Laura~



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