poetboy5454

Improvement

Just a little too late

Just a little too far

Bound to this fate

A night without stars

 

Just a little better

Just a little farther

They may soar ahead

But, still haven't fled

 

A step turns into a fall

A run morphs into a crawl

A woe transforms to a blaze

Doubts become a haze

 

Just a little better

Just a little farther

No matter how far or near

Let a small change defy fear

Until it bursts into victory

 

Comments3

  • Goldfinch60

    Small steps will get you to your goals, just keep taking them.

  • Lorna

    Let's be forever hopeful!

  • poelove

    they may soar ahead but still haven't fled love this line as it sums up this poem of persistence..
    I would however suggest you put a space and separate the last line thereby keeping all verses at four lines in keeping with the poems rhythm.. really enjoyed this piece



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