When the
heart
breaks its
as
silent as
the
wind blowing
no
one can hear
the
pain no one
can
see the tears
as
they silently fall
no one
can understand
how
it feels when
no one
hear's or listens
as
you fall into
oblivion
never to return.
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Author:
The girl who never knew. (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 6th, 2018 01:50
- Comment from author about the poem: This poems is what I feel and how it feels when I feel like my heart is breaking it feels like your falling into oblivion never to come out.You go through life not knowing if your going to survive which is kinda the best part there's no reason to see what the future holds. Every love and heart break is a lesson & adventure.
- Category: Sad
- Views: 28
- Users favorite of this poem: Mars❤
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Comments3
Nowness
beautifully written 🙂
Thanks so much😊😊😊
HI MARS ~ WELCOME TO MPS ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ more please. Love the shape ~ thin & endless like a lament over lost love ! Most of us on MPS have fallen in & out of LOVE sometimes painfully so we can (and will !) empathise ! I like the final line in your personal comment ! "Every LOVE & HEARTBREAK is a Lesson and an an Adventure" That's my Mantra too and it's refreshing to hear it from a Lady ! Is that BRONX New York or a City in another State ? I love all the US States I have visited ~ vibrant even IOWA ! Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please visit my Poems ~ Thanks B.
Thank you so much & yes it's bronx new york city have you ever visited new york b before?
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