I need to bottle up this feeling of how great I feel
So when I'm back at the table of an unsure meal
Looking at the bubbles of options waiting to reveal
That the who that's inside is always wanting to be healed
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Thought I'd add my latest attempt at playing the violin ;)
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Comments4
Dan,
Nice seeing you again!
I must compliment you on
a fine write and a fine
violin rendition of...
“You are my sunshine”!
They complement each
other very well!
I enjoyed the write, the
music, and your companion!
~Laura~
Thank you ever so much for a wonderful warm comment, he was waiting for he's treat.
You’re welcome, Dan!
I must say...he was very
patient!
Thanks Dan for letting us sit with you and your friend on the beach while you played! What's a mere 3,000 miles!
Lol, we are so glad you could join us.
Enjoyed both music and prose. Great stuff Dan
Thank you kindly sir, it can only get better 😉
To get better you have to be somewhere and this a great somewhere to be.
Your words and music were sunshine to my eyes Dan - - loved your video and wishing you bundles of options as you and your pet meet life with the simple solution of bottling good feelings of just being together on a quiet beach............. great read my friend.
Thank you and I hope this reflects your happiness too
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