They tried to-
take a bite out of my cake,
leaving teeth marks
in my mind
Icing-
d
r
i
p
s
-
with
-a citrus taste
that
-cut my buds..
...and
the cherry slips and-
f
a
l
l
s
but i will replace it with another.
..and thankfully,
no 'milk had been spilt'!
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Author:
Poetic25 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 12th, 2018 06:49
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Comments3
And here I am trying to cut back on sugar......... What a way to go Michael.. Loved the use of sweets for this imagery.......... glad they couldn't "get you"...........
Clever form and well thought out message in this cry against those taking bites from the unsuspecting mind Michael - - amazing the short-line powerful punches which end on such a positive note.
Clever write Michael, glad all was well.
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