'No milk spilt'

Poetic25

They tried to-

take a bite out of my cake,

leaving teeth marks
in my mind

Icing-

d
r
i
p
s
-
with
-a citrus taste

that
-cut my buds..

...and

the cherry slips and-

f
a
l
l
s

but i will replace it with another.

..and thankfully,

no 'milk had been spilt'!

  • Author: Poetic25 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 12th, 2018 06:49
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments3

  • Lorna

    And here I am trying to cut back on sugar......... What a way to go Michael.. Loved the use of sweets for this imagery.......... glad they couldn't "get you"...........

  • Fay Slimm.

    Clever form and well thought out message in this cry against those taking bites from the unsuspecting mind Michael - - amazing the short-line powerful punches which end on such a positive note.

  • Goldfinch60

    Clever write Michael, glad all was well.



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