My thoughts

Part 1

I trusted you,gave you everything 

Now when I see you I feel disgusted what happened to us,

My one and only to the one who broke me.

Forgive me please if it was my fault.

I miss you.

Comments2

  • sylviasearcher

    Captures the complexity of blame and forgiveness in a subtle simplistic prose.

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks FRIEND for your first POEM ~ Poignant & Lonely ! It happens and has often happened to me over the past 17 years ~ and in my experience we were both to blame for breakups ~ but so often the relationship can't be mended and that is what hurts ! Building a new one takes time ! I'm OK now ~ see todays POEM ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN



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