Mottakeenur Rehman

SOMETIME'S IT'S NICE JUST TO HEAR IT OUT LOUD:AAI YO BACHA

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When the words become garbage 

While the meanings transferred to greed of meaningfulness;

And if hardly incase,the meanings of poetry have undergone almost an extinct position

Then once you will definitely be the mainstream of my poetry!

        Although the words seldom lapping 

        with low sound by the shore of 

        narrowness,

        By looking at your misty chuckle's view

        I would like to write poetry into a 

        panoramic envision of creativities !

Now a days my mind is totally absorbed in poetry 

Antique fatigue laughing or crying

Everywhere my mind is diving for the venture of colour's ocean.

And that is why probably sometimes I cry and often laugh 

Now you are absolutely becoming the omnipresent sense to the absence of nonsense mind! 

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It is actually really sweet 

When you stay up late to talk to me

You have a lovely way with words,

You really do.....this is very lovely..''Aai yo Bacha!'' instead of null and void scenario.

There is never such a thing as being too imaginative lol  imaginative is great!

         Your body language is stunningly 

         beautiful

         Your smile take me to the moon and 

         back.

         You are the spirit of omnipotent

         soul

         So fortunately I hope you will come 

         soon without fail.

         Through the essence of poetry 

         You will make me happy 

         And wipe out the grief of hectic 

         shedule.

         Might be on the threshold of new world

         Accepting the grandeur of variegated 

         colours

         I have lost myself removing the

         gesture of black and white!

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On a journey to life-

So far I'm carrying a little circulation of eager expectations,

Some stirred howling feelings of my rolling mind always tell me:

''write down an unique poem to the universe'';

Why ~living within the barrier of limited prosperity 

Such type of strike is striking in the amidst of heart ?

Why irresistible electric words circulating themselves at any length!

          Why to a large extent,looking at you 

          with high resilience 

          I am reanimated and destined to write

          down a poem at once,

          Although the words are seemed to be

          useless

          Or the meanings to be uncladed very

          soon!!

 

NOTE:HERE ''AAI YO BACHA''~MEANS ~OH MY DEAREST ~ITS AN ASSAMESE STENTECE.        

Comments3

  • Michael Edwards

    Love the flow of this and the use of language - great write Mottakeenur

  • FineB

    A beautiful poem Mottakeenur.

    You have a way with words.

    Keep writing
    FineB

  • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

    A wonderful sentimental epic, where u show love ,appreciation so poetically and with imagery. Kudos. Loved your moony wording.


    Nice to read from u again, and Pleez do review, give your thoughts as to my newest poem too.

    • Mottakeenur Rehman

      Thanks for your overlook ....I will do later.. For your creations



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