Yours

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  BRIAN & ANGELA April 2nd, 2018 17:30

  Welcome Karoline ~ Thanks for your first poem a very intriguing expression of your Love ~ expressed in a quartet of Irish Haiku ! 1. Tethered by your smile ! 2. Silently fracturing ? 3. A coin in his pocket ~ A token ? I always give my Lady (ANGELA) a token when we are apart ! 4. SHATTERED ? Because of the parting or something else ? Thanks for sharing & caring ! YOURS BRIAN Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.

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    KarolineApril 2nd, 2018 17:42

    Hi Brian!
    Thanks for your comment 😊
    'I fracture silently' is because everytime he leaves again I feel like a fissure is opening up in my heart. 'A coin in your pocket' is in reference to him unknowingly carrying my love with him after he's left, and 'I am shattered' is because this has been ongoing for so long that I sometimes feel there is no piece of me left unbroken anymore.
    
    Sorry for getting so heavy!
    
    Karoline

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    BRIAN & ANGELAApril 2nd, 2018 18:04

    THANKS FOR YOUR POEM AND EXPLANATION ~ I love a bit of Irish Intrigue and whenever I\'ve been in N Ireland you all have a way with words and the CRAIC ! I\'m glad I was not too far off in my analysis ! I gave my love a Toy Monkey for her to remember ME by ~ She gave me a PANDA (a TOY one !) to put on my Pillow. I was born & raised in Liverpool which is why I have a touch of Irish sentimentality and love of language especially Poetry ! Every Blessing to you and Your Girls ~ Yours BRIAN Thanks for adding me as your First MPS Friend. B.

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  Lorna April 3rd, 2018 01:42

  Very lovely and poignant Karoline.....

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    KarolineApril 3rd, 2018 01:54

    Thank you 🙂

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  Fay Slimm. April 3rd, 2018 03:01

  Welcome to this friendly site Karoline - - I like the flow of this romantic lament. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

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    KarolineApril 3rd, 2018 03:20

    Thank you Fay 😊
    The site is lovely and so are all the people I've spoken to so far!